a small wooden structure,
few random walls
separating us into
worlds of our own
million miles’ distance
across few inches
your uncountable admirers,
I feel all alone
even an open wide passage
will not build bridges
innumerable valleys,
unsurpassable ridges
tunnelling my way
through to your heart
too much pain to pass
before I can start
life has passed,
lost love never found
killed heart didn’t cry,
never made a sound
soul still searches,
and searches once more
can we find each other,
before shutting the life door

Beautifully written and depicted!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You are most welcome!
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🙂
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And I have to add, it’s a beautiful door. Leaving one open for love is important.
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I wholeheartedly agree, but then egos, past pain, vanity and insanity comes in the way.
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Also very true. Here’s to love opening doors.
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Absolutely, here’s to love opening hearts 🙂
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I like what you said better, grin, hearts not doors.
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🙂
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Wonderful! I have the same wish 🙂
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Good to know, many thanks for sharing 🙂
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May that wish comes true
in forms a few
like colours on a butterfly wing
your passions plea
spring’s sweet glee
making hearts melt and sing
may your beloved feel
what you have felt
my affectionate bee with a sting 🙂
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Very lovely & sweet. I imagine honey dripping from your pen. 🙂
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honey dripping pen
kissing lipstick stain
a beautiful mind inspires
a poor poet’s brain
too many thoughts to follow
all we need is one
glowing, sparkling, enriching
brighter than mighty sun
once that thought is known
drape with passion, affection
present to the divine
pathway to redemption
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AB, You’ve uplifted my soul and your words felt like a warm hug, when I needed one. Love this 🙂
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Brilliant 🙂
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The depiction and the flow of words with profound deepness
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and kind appreciation 🙂
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I like it
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Thank you so much.
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nice
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Liking the flow of this piece. Thanks for sharing.
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Many thanks for your kind comment 🙂
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Reblogged this on 21 Shades of Blue.
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Many thanks 🙂
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Beautiful just beautiful!
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Thank you so so much 🙂
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So much emotion, fitly articulated…master writer.
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Thank you for such generous praise 🙂
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…excellent wordsmithing, that man 🙂
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Many thanks SG 🙂
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LOVE IT!!!
the words, the feelings, the flow, the door!!!!
love, brilliantly expressed.
Thank you, AB for sharing (and for stopping by 🙂 )
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It was my pleasure and I am really pleased to hear that you liked my ordinary work 🙂
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this is tragically beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome dear 🙂
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🙂
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Dude – that’s beautiful! And I love the photo!😺
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Thanks Kats 🙂
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Why of course!
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Your words tell the story for all.
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You are very kind with your words! Much appreciated!
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Reblogged this on PenneyVanderbilt.
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Many thanks 🙂
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This one talked to my heart!
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I am pleased in a slightly sad way that you have suffered similar episodes as well! I hope you have found peace and contentment!
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Some days are better than others. But that is life. 🙂
There is always a comfort felt when we meet others who understand us. Not that we wish those feelings or heartache on others, but we feel a connection and don’t feel AS alone in what we’re experiencing.
hugs*
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Lots of hugs back and may you live in contentment with that realisation 🙂
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Still one minute at a time.
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One minute is a life time! as Dory says ‘Just keep swimming’ 🙂
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🙂
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