Today was the day
when all was supposed
soon to be disposed,
worldly belongings
worries, longings,
deep slumber
is just so near,
eternal rest
with certain fears
of unknown,
insidious, grown,
scares, multilayers,
do not spare
raw nerves,
notice has been served
it is time,
sleep now
wake up to
reality new
after the end,
soul renews
seeing on the other end
long lost relations, friends,
smiling, waving,
reassuring
beautiful green,
doorway alluring,
pathway near,
cross without fear
spilling emotions,
unable to bear,
home forever,
uncontrollably cry
a beloved’s kiss,
wipes tears dry
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
wonderful poem and AMAZING photo… did you take that?
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indeed I did, all images and words on this blog are mine 😊
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except of course wonderful comments from you and others 😊
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Oh yes, this is great AB. I especially liked the last four lines, “home forever, uncontrollably cry, a beloved’s kiss, wipes tears dry”
–It makes me think of the biblical verse in Revelation:
“He will wipe every tear from their eyes. There will be no more death or mourning or crying or pain, for the old order of things has passed away.”
You know, I was just considering death and the brevity of life these past few days. It made me feel sad. I really believe that it provokes such strong emotions because it was never meant to be. I just know that I want to live my life valuing that which is of true value. I don’t have a lot of money or things, but I have an amazing family, forgiveness of my sins and peace with God. I still fear the hour of death, or someone I love dying before me, but I have hope. And when hope is lost, then we have nothing.
Really wonderful and poignant AB.
🙂
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Thank you for such wonderful contribution Staci which perfectly compliment thoughts I have tried to convey. 😊
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🙂
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😊
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A superb one again…. I like the words more than the pic.
Need to ask you something … do you blindly “like” stuff? I see you liking almost every post …. on my blog as well as some others …makes me wonder…JLT
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many thanks aruna for your kind words, good question, unable to understand how can I blindly do such an act 😊 and perhaps is a bit discrimantory to blind people as well 😊
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Ha Ha! Good play of words, AB!
Not sure whether you really “like” or just hit the like button. You rarely comment on them so one never knows … just thinking aloud…n having a bad day as well .. sorry for being impudent! 🙂
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Unable to comment as I go through a lot, I am very generous as I believe we all bloggers deserve praise for their efforts. I do comment on exceptional stuff, sometimes write long poems to respond as well 😀
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And I hope you have a much much better day tomorrow Aruna 😊
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So beautifully written.
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thank you so much 😊
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Your closing lines impact the most, AB. 🙂
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going for the kill at the end, perhaps finale of a great act, or life’s end 😊 or fat lady singing effect etc etc
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thank you so much 😊
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❤
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thank you 😊
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Sooooooo well written and thought provoking !! ❤
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Many thanks, truly grateful 😊
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There was a time when one took the time to make all things beautiful.
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indeed there was 😊
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bravo, fantastic poem, great imagery. a pleasure to read
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Thank you so much for those kind words. Very much appreciated!
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Bravo!
I m a little short on inspiration nowadays fellow bard … Care to let me borrow some of yours? 😝
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I think we sorted that emergency, let me know if you get stuck again in mundanity of daily existence 🙂
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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