life, why you are not fair
because of you,
indeed because of you,
I lost that zeal and flair
now flying to the moon
to find tranquility soon
grip slipping away from sanity
slowly becoming a loon
life, why you are not fair
because of you,
indeed because of you,
I lost that zeal and flair
now flying to the moon
to find tranquility soon
grip slipping away from sanity
slowly becoming a loon
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
as always, a beautiful poem! I do think you are quite sane, in my humble opinion, with a lot of zeal! How otherwise could you write such great poetry? Blessings!
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Claudia, thank you for showing such confidence in me. Perhaps just half mad like Alice 🙂
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Very inspiring… thanks for the lift beneath my unfurled soul…
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You are very kind, thank you so much 🙂
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No! Not a loon!!!
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🙂 thank you 🙂
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The word doesn’t fit into poetry. How about ‘slowly becoming buffoon’ ? I don’t like that word ‘loon’ …
On the other hand she said brightly, it IS your poem ! [grin]
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🙂
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I feel like you wrote about me last week! 🙂
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Yes of course 🙂 who else it could be 🙂
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Glad I could be of inspiration 🙂
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Pleasure is all mine, really pleased that you could relate to that 🙂
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Hey AB!… moon seems to be ‘the place’ to find tranquility…:)
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It is due to its Cheesy nature 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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Well done! Love the moon!!
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Many thanks Kats 🙂
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Well of course!💙
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🙂
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Very nice poem!
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Many many thanks Raul!
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Nice!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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A timely share… wishing you all the Best AB.
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Fly me to the moon and let me play among the stars ……..
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Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars. ❤️❤️❤️
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I have that Frank Sinatra song playing beautifully in my head now, thank you. Love the poem but you are no loon. Sir! The photo is gorgeous! That blue…. magnificent
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Thank you so much ArtyKat 🙂 I hope all is well
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