beautiful tormentor, love of eternity
thousand daggers piercing sanity
evening masses, streets and passes
unnoticed in this deep trance,
can not steal a mole, let alone your soul
certainly unfit for romance
I won’t take tea with you
coffee is another matter, perhaps later,
unable to refuse your charm
association deep harm
will die in a ditch, as an overdosed snitch
and blame squarely lies on you

Coffee or tea – the everlasting challenge … 🙂
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🙂 indeed 🙂
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🙂
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I. Love. This.
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I am so happy to hear that 🙂
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This is cheekily beautiful!
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I am extremely pleased, thank you for liking so many of my posts. Truly appreciate your support 🙂
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Well they all deserved it 🙂
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you are too kind and generous my dear friend 🙂
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Love, love, love!
“beautiful tormentor, love of eternity
thousand daggers piercing sanity”
Such a powerful beginning.
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Thank you so much, it seems you have decided to make my day. I am truly humbled 🙂
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I love the daggers, tormentor in the casual scene of tea. Excellent poem!!!
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I am so grateful for your absolutely generous appreciation of my humble words 🙂
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I have no words to describe the feeling this inspires … wonderful, just absolutely wonderful.
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I am truly over the moon, thank you so much for your kindness 🙂
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Just wow. You’re amazing….I love the beginning. You make it look effortless.
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I am truly humbled, thank you so much for these wonderful words, made my day 🙂
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Thank you ! your poem caused me to look at” Japanese Song of Love and Other Things”:
Father is plowing
Daughter does her work;
And mother’s out back
Cooking rice.
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Life is remarkable and you captured in your post its essence as it passes.
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thank you so much for your kind thoughts and linking my humble words to the Japanese poem.
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The truth of life is so well represented. Kudos! 😀
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You are very kind my dear Rameshwari Ram Krishan (beautiful name with few Hindu gods thrown in for a stranger’s amusement)! 🙂
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@ab – thank you ! A typical hindu name 😀
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Indeed 🙂 I have many friends from India and from Pakistan who are Hindus, it is a pleasure to have you around!
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🙂
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That’s witty & well written
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You are very kind coffee lover 🙂
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great rhythm
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Thank you 🙂
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“Certainly unfit for romance”
Yes, in another time. Maybe.
They certainly love each other, but in different ways.
How cruel life is.
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Sometimes it is and on other times may be destiny has a better a plan 🙂
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Like knowing that fate has something better, or that you’re letting the love of your life go away?
I do not understand this life and the logic it follows. I’m lost.
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I am afraid there is no logic to living, it is all a big coincidence continuously happening all around us. We are all lost, however how we deal with that makes all the difference. In my humble view losing oneself is the best way to find life and love around you. Kindest regards
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Beautiful words. I already gave up finding love, I’ll just stay here and wait. People are too cruel to understand the fullness of what love is. Thank you.
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Let it find you, bind you, blind you, wrists will be cut, blood red gut, no where to run, no home no hut, all relations, emotions, inhibitions shut, time to dance naked..love does not taketh, any prisoners without blame, just carcasses from old flames, silent sobbing souls sans shame, irony is, like a drugged leper lame, I will do it all again
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I do not think I can handle another. I´m hurt. I do not want to cry again.
Beautiful words.
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may you find your peace! before the last release, breath cease!
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Many thanks
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Tea is too gen-tea-ll.
Coffee, later
A better activator!
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🙂
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