Start of an affair
In deep blue sea
bodies get hot
from ever shining sun
minds just wander
into the depth of bay
he sees a girl
with eyes like ocean
Reaching his emotions
nearly drowns
in shallow water
words fumble
slow starter
Finally gather thoughts
Tell her a lie,
Tell her a joke
Make her smile
Make her hope
Get her hooked
start of the day
Let her carry him
All the way!
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
You know what I especially like. He sees a girl with eyes like ocean. If you just listen to it, you’ll hear ‘he SEAS a girl with eyes like ocean’. Very clever of you.
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🙂 thank you 🙂
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romantic~ touch myheart
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Thanks
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I can almost hear the sounds of the ocean, and may the waves carry the both of them into the horizon 😉
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Well he was carried till she had the strength then it is unknown what actually happened, did he wake up from his slumber and peddle back her to safety of the shore or they went away for to an unknown destination, only the seagulls know!
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As such is life 😉 Thank you for humouring me with an answer. Much appreciated.
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It is a pleasure to have you around 🙂 thank for the visit and pretty much liking everything on my front page and beyond 🙂
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The pleasure is mine. It is not every day that I can come across such evocative verses, with fascinating perspectives. Thank YOU, and to OM. It is through his page that I found yours 😉
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Thanks to both of you and I am really humbled by your comments and admiration for my fairly ordinary words and deeds, I hope to see you around, I did enjoy your sensual poem on your page as well! emotions to the brim! Beautiful!
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Ahhh…those erotica…Well, between you and me – they are all mere fiction designed to solicit deeper thoughts or conversations about love, desire, and the relationship between men and women with my audience. Hopefully, it works. Haha
Thank you so much for your reciprocal visit and comments as well. You have a new fan and follower in me 🙂
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🙂
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Man that looks peaceful out there on that water.
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Many thanks, it is indeed. 🙂
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Beautiful lines and a stunning shot…
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Happens the other way too… Great description
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Sure 🙂 thank you so much 🙂
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Why would he tell her a lie?
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Inherent, to make him more presentable, exaggeration is quite common in men 🙂
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Hmm
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🙂
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🙂
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Ahhh The beginning phase… or the wuss phase. I told ex-gf before that I don’t cry at all…. which is a total lie. I always cry over a tearjerking movie. 😀
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Thank you for such honest admission Rommel 🙂
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That was a very tender and tentative beginning. I hope they make it 🙂
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Many thanks for your kind words 🙂
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Hey I really liked your poem, and you don’t have to publish this comment, just that the fourth line has a grammatical error (unless it is deliberate) – minds just wanders
It should either be “Minds just wander” or “Mind just wanders”
Again – Great Poem 🙂
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thank you so much, of course it is perfectly fine to identity such errors 🙂
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Welcome 🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much 🙂
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😊
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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