Scribbled long
pain filled letter
death matters,
life in tatters,
unending wish list,
deeds to be done
extremely injurious,
poisonous gun
nothing a surprise,
nonfactual surmise,
thrill dissipated,
vanquished starter
standing naked in
iced cold water
words assist in
lost purpose found
motivation chained
maimed and bound
deep daring questions
unachievable quests
Armageddon primed
catastrophe lest
opportunities dark
demon shiny sparks
continuous torture
blood soaked marks
each letter describe
blackened fate
dripping venom
hated hate
deeper than abyss
evening murder
evil madly runs away
assassins shudder
thoughts so red
blood appears white
parchment in possession
killed on sight

Another fabulous image and those are truly powerful words. Bravo!
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Thank you so much, I normally don’t venture too much to the dark side, perhaps sometimes I want to scare myself 🙂
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I think we all like a little scare every now and then 😉
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Indeed we do 🙂
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A deep poem AB… as you look into the Abyss of darkness
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Many many thanks Sue for your comment. When I read about gang wars, kidnappings, rapes, torture, ethnic cleansing, wars, and outright genocide in various parts of world my heart demands I do something about it…
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Yes my own heart has bled and cries with you my friend.. I once wrote a poem called Fragmented Souls.. as I too reached out with my heart.
http://suedreamwalker.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/fragmented-souls/
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Beautiful message of courage and fortitude Sue, thank you for sharing that!
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You are welcome… 🙂
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🙂
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Wow !
Powerful words !
I sometimes write on similar themes, check out my blog: http://banikaur.wordpress.com/
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Many thanks, I will certainly have a look 🙂
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You definitely captured emotional darkeness! Well done! 😀
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Thank you so much 🙂
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I like the way you write so broadly.
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Thank you so much, grateful for your kind appreciation 🙂
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great visual effect
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Many many thanks 🙂
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Very good!
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Many thanks!
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Welcome!
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🙂
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Reblogged this on KCJones.
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I liked your rhyme scheme………
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Wow. To all of it.
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Thank you for writing great blogs
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