to kiss, the most beautiful few
to miss, anyone else or you
to lit, a revolutionary fire
submit, to lust and desire
to lie, gain fake applause
to die, for an ill thought cause
to pry, on innocent young
go high, with white coke dung
to leave, my spirit alone
believe, patriotism on loan
aspire, to reach at the top
expire, before the last stop
lend, undeserved golden spoon
end, my struggle so soon

I really like the style of this poem. It’s rhythmic, deep and so unique at the same time.
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Kate, you have certainly made my weekend, truly grateful ๐
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I also loved the structure. Felt good to read it.
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Sonya, I am so pleased that you have enjoyed reading it. Many thanks. Kindest regards, AB
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excellent
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Many thanks!
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I understand the words they are great but my english is not so good ๐ By the way the picture is also great !!!!
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Many thanks Nancy, more than happy to explain them to you ๐
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the writing as always is great, but……you look hot! Tell the truth thatยดs not you that is photo shop
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Hi Charly, but….that is not me in the photo so of course if I looked like that I would look very hot ๐ so it is not photoshop just my younger brother!! Who is very well made by heavens! Top quality build ๐
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Great stuff. There is a real back and forth rhythm in the poem too.
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Thank you so much Simon ๐
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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AB, I love the lines and flow of this poem. Wondering if I found different meaning within than others? I felt sadness at the end as though a young life had been lost?
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Kim there is always sadness not the kind you refer, however have seen many young deaths, some avoidable and some pure accidents! The message is to carry on, don’t know what surprise is concealed in the sands of time ๐
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I see it from another point of view, AB. Than you.
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Thank you Kim!
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Beautiful rhyme scheme!!!…..
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Many thanks ๐
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You are most welcome..!
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