Take my heart
it is for free
if in return I get thee
There is a contradiction
you realise
without me the deal
won’t materialise
free means nothing
in return you should ask
throw away the cloak
remove the mask
get down on your knees
and with passion task
sweetly, most humbly
present your heart
And that my dear
would be a good start
for our journey
which after few years
feel like eternity
bring down tears
Why o why
you went for the trade
life was much simpler
before that
Colossal
Gigantic
Humongous
mistake you made 🙂

Very loving and a little bit humorous!
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Of course, humour is the best form to tell a hard truth 🙂 thank you so much 🙂
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Just right!
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Many thanks 🙂
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Wonderful.. 🙂
All i can say is I’ll Reblog.. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂 I am pleased that you enjoyed it 🙂
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Reblogged this on perferviddreams and commented:
Why o Why
You went for the trade
Life was much simple.. awesomely written by AB
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I liked the touch of humour. I have to say that photo does not look like an auspicious start to wedded life 😉
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Appearances are most deceptive 🙂 I wish both of them very well and hope they will be happy their whole lives together. This was more about life in general 🙂
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Beautifully written, granted. Your ideas are always worth pondering, AB. Still, for the sake of discussion (sorry, it’s a bad habit): is “simpler” the objective we seek? Are we satisfied with “simpler” — even if hard attained? I kind of like complicated.
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BB, I love a decent conversation and challenges, regarding simplicity vs complicated, I have tried to reflect a stereotypical male version 🙂 Women require emotions, security, care, love, envy, intellect, long lasting relationship. Men food, sex and sleep (TV and booze optional) 🙂
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The click oozes out that between the lines bitterness. 🙂
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really, it is just a random street click, nothing more 🙂 no bitterness, just fun 🙂
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The turn of the girl… Hard posture.. It depicted smth else… Khair might be my wrong judgement
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perhaps just got them at the wrong moment 🙂
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Haha, no you caught smth very contrasting to their outfit.. :p it was a good click. And I just realised that you aren’t that fellow I thought to be. I mean, I thought that you’re in my Twitter list. Lol same initials. 😃
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hmmm, mistaken identity, no wonder I was getting that much attention 🙂 I thank you still 🙂
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Oh no… I knew you aren’t that person..but initials (I pointed that) you were getting appreciation for your creativity & for giving me feedback on my ranting. 😊 c’mon… You should’ve known that ..
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of course, but then there nothing wrong with slight mischief making, and pretending that all of this conversation was with a random stranger who mistook me for someone else 🙂
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😃 that’s right … Mischief is the chief source of happiness 😃
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Indeed, if not happiness then at least fee microseconds of joy 🙂
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Still there’s smth about it.. Or may be my imagination does the story telling thingy 😃
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of course it does my very creative friend 🙂
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Reblogged this on La Petit Muse.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome 🙂
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🙂
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Great work AB
the shot also amazing 😉
Thanks for sharing.
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Reblogged this on crjen1958.
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🙂
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Old traditions, forced into marriage,
times have change,
only in some lives
you see this change
in other you see
a sad point of view…
Like ¨i do¨
chris
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🙂
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