Thoughts reflected
Silhouettes refracted
Heartache, sizzling burning pain
Rambling roaming brain
Visiting memory lane
Hustled hassled nerves
Unmissable rising verve
as you passed my heart window
Without saying hello
Most loved forgotten fellow
Contradictions and me…
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
I love this, AB.
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I am extremely pleased to hear that 🙂 thank you AD 🙂
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😀 I’m extremely pleased to see you extremely pleased. 😀 LOL
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🙂
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Mirror on the wall of our lives. VW
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Or a thick refracted glass window to our heart 🙂 either way thank you so much 🙂
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🙂
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“unmissable rising verve” ~ there’s such energy and movement in those words!
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Thank you so much Jane 🙂
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This is one to keep, remember and repeat whenever thinking of a lost love. It’s lovely.
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I am really pleased that you liked it so much, agree with your sentiment completely 🙂
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immensely beautifully crafted.
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thank you so much 🙂
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would you consider adding another line just prior to the last line. my brain really wanted to insert one in there…to rhyme with me. :)…i think deep down i want to be an editor . ..ha ha!
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that is intentional, it is about lost love so last verse losing its rhythm and an abrupt ending emphasise the imperfect nature of our existence and relationships, I hope you don’t mind if I keep it like this 🙂
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Awesomely beautiful! Exquisite. 😉
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Many many thanks Carol 🙂
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loved it
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Thanks 🙂
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Reblogged this on My Bloggerdiok.
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Love what I’m seeing on here. Your use of labels is so intriguing and creates a must click feeling IE: Awesomeness etc! From a fellow currently rootless nomad of life! Cheers for finding my humble blog! happy sunday xxx
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Thank you so much for your beautiful thoughts and encourragement! I am really pleased that you found my labeling intriguing, my dear fellow Nomad 🙂 Cheers to mutual discovery!
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Very touching – I always love your work! 💚
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and you are a kind soul Kats even when you eat birds and munch mice 🙂
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Why thank you, human! Just doing my job! 😺🐭🐤
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🙂
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*purrs *
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Liked it!👏
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you are very kind 🙂
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