brick upon brick
foundation being laid
moments are in hand
destiny being delayed
right now what matters
forget future pain
today is very wise
tomorrow so insane
brick upon brick
foundation being laid
moments are in hand
destiny being delayed
right now what matters
forget future pain
today is very wise
tomorrow so insane
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
Very strong composition
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Many thanks for your very generous feedback 🙂
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So beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poetry/vision with us. I want to recognize your blog with a Very Inspirational Blogger Award. No obligation to participate, but if you manage the time and you would like to, head over to http://adjustingyourfocus.wordpress.com/2014/09/05/made-my-whole-week/ and you will find the instructions there, although I know you’ve done this before. 😉
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Truly honoured and humbled. Thank you so much 🙂
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It’s totally deserved. *hug*
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🙂
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Awesome, very much liked it. Keep writing, nice work 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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beautifully build up the words with magical message
with regards
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Many thanks for your kind comment 🙂
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Reblogged this on Amber Skye Forbes and commented:
Great piece of poetry.
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Many thanks for your re blog and most flattering introduction to my humble words 🙂 extremely grateful!
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You’re welcome! I was very glad to re-blog it.
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🙂 Extremely grateful!
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Beautiful writing.
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Thank you so much Raul!
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Most lovely bricks I think! Lovely poem!
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Thank you so much MM, good to get this burst of comments from you, very enjoyable and cherished by the humble recipient 🙂
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“Burst” it is that way. You popped into my head so I came to visit before my brain moved on to something else. I’m trying to do things as I think of them because after that it goes bye bye! ✿
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Thank you so much MM for keeping me in your thoughts 🙂
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Always you are a wonderful photographer. I was thinking of you when I am looking for cover shots. Do you ever photograph the oil refineries? I’ll drop you a quick email. It’s hard to get my editors to move into something new! 😀
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Hi MM, unfortunatley no refineries 🙂 good luck with your endeavours to change established order!
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I didn’t see any on your blog! Just thought I’d ask! 😄😄
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Interesting piece you have written!
Unforgiven
Life upon life, the
human-race is now being made…
Damn religion thankfulness
they’ve delayed…
Rightnow the only thing
which matters,
seeing that any religion
truthfully shatters…,.
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