Looking through the window
Flying fishes again
Leaped out of water
Silver fish first
Golden next
Then a pink
Is that what I saw
Let me think!
more and more
turning into rainbows
all the way to sun
Having lots of fun
leaping back into the water
Doing a ballet
One of them is a starter
spinning around
Pirouette in blue
shining in my heart
Heart becomes
a rainbow too
kisses on my cheeks
Hugs to the soul
I giggle, I laugh
Roll and roll
Happiness raw
Then they said
au revoir
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
au revoir 🙂 sweet!!
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Thank you so much 🙂 if you don’t know, this is a continuation of ‘secrets of the universe’ the first poem, which is about children and their amazing power of imagination 🙂 do a search on my blog with that title and you will get there 🙂
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I just read it! Do you feel like this? Do you see life (really) like this? Because I do and I really loved what you wrote. Beautiful…
xo
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Thank you so much, the central idea of these poems ‘flying fish and rainbow’ has come from a four year old, the word-smithing is mine including some imagination 🙂
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It is truly lovely. Thank you so much for sharing and for being open to the innocence within and without!
Gold Star 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Sweet poem!
http://marthakennedy.wordpress.com/2014/03/28/blues/
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Many thanks 🙂
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i loved this one!
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Thank you 🙂
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Very nice. I liked this a lot.
I giggle, I laugh
Roll and roll
Happiness raw
Then they said
au revoir
Perfect.
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Thank you sir 🙂
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Delightful !! ❤
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🙂 thank you 🙂
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Really sweet and so spontaneous….colorful.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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OH! Kids would love this poem! I am a kid at heart so I love it, too!
It would be fun to read to kids and them have them create art based on your poem! 🙂
Whimsical, imaginative, vivid!
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Thank you so much, very much inspired by a little girl’s thought process 🙂
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Joyful and delightful. I hope it’s in the .pdf … 😛
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This I wrote yesterday 🙂 book is from early February, it takes 6 weeks for apple to publish anything 🙂
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I know. I was pulling your leg. Again.
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🙂
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❤
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Awwwwww, are these little ones friends of your?
Very cute
🙂
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Indeed, the hands you see are the hands of the little angel with flying fish idea 🙂
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It makes you smile! What can be great than that? Here’s a huge hug!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on sueshan123blog.
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how sweetly described:) enjoyed and liked every word:) beautiful
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Thank you so much for your generous and kind appreciation TR 🙂
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pleasure is all mine, thanks again 🙂
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Beautiful. I like it 😊
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Lovely lines!
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Many thanks 🙂
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