we were together, forever
sat for hours, morning, noon and night
all was good, it was brilliant, bright
time passed so quickly, rather briskly.
sudden departure after fifty short years
clock stopped, still river of sadness, airborne tears
some frozen in my eyes, unable to blink
can not move any limbs, didn’t want to think
all I want is you and me and we be
sitting together, hand in hand to see sunset
or on a cloudy day, let night set
in motion, inkling of another beautiful day
and I miss you, could you find a bench
at the edge of paradise, I will find it
as long, with your sweet smell it drench
though I am not worthy, except belonging to you
which has kept me true, will let me through
rather quietly, into grand, adorned gates of heaven
leftover years of life, perhaps five, six or seven
of treacherous wait, will end soon
when on heaven’s moon, I see you smiling

It’s so touching. Brilliant piece of work.
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Thank you so much, really appreciate your comment and kind appreciation.
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Really touching
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Most welcome
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Brilliant!!!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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I love this. There’s something so beautiful about seeing an elderly couple together, after years of monogamous love and togetherness, enjoying their last mortal days with each other.
Just beautiful AB.
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Staci, I am really really pleased to hear that you enjoyed this tale. 🙂
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Such beautiful writing. I love it…it’s so sweet. 🙂
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Thank you so much for your sweet comment 🙂
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Loved the Simplicity AB..!! 🙂
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Thank you so much Sam 🙂
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Brilliant. It amazes me how much wonderful poetry you are able to produce!
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I write extremely ordinary words and rhymes, your beautiful thoughts and interpretations make them exceptional 🙂
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Really beautiful work.
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Thank you so much Claire for appreciating my scribblings 🙂
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Hey, you are really good. This poem brought tears to my eyes, brother,
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Thank you again for such empathy with my thoughts, really appreciate it!
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Beautiful, what a wonderful, emotional piece.
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Truly grateful KLC!
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There is a “special” bench in one of my short stories. This reminded me of that. Such a beautiful piece you have written here. 🙂
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I am extremely pleased to hear that Susan, thank you so much 🙂
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All those Beautiful thoughts; evoked by just the glimpse of a bench. Lovely. Kudos, AB. 🙂
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Swami Ji, good to hear from you, I hope all is well, looking great in your new photo. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement, truly appreciated!
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Thank YOU, AB!
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You are most welcome Swami 🙂
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My mum sits on that bench on her own now, watching the waves roll in.
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Marym, may she always have love of her life by her side in heart and in her soul, keep her whole till the day she departs, as we all will!
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Thanks so much, AB. that’s lovely. So are your poems.
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I am truly flattered 🙂
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Masterful.
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Very kind Simon 🙂
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Many thanks
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Many many thanks 🙂
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