Last wish

Soul cries incessantly tears of solitude
I am lost in the wilderness without you
I forgot you in my heart, blinded by faith
The music played on, passion had its death
I danced and danced till blood seeps through my toes
Please have some pity and listen to my woes
My master, my soul, to the last breath
Don’t leave me a comatose soul with no solace
Servant, a slave, a concubine in your palace
Take me in, crush my heart for my deed
Cut my flesh in pieces, revenge tigers to feed
Savagery that will be, only self to blame
Each piece will still call your name
At last at last, my pain will cease
I will die, in absolute tranquility and peace


70 thoughts on “Last wish”

  1. AB, that is a great poem. I wanted to write, ‘disturbing,’ but after reading the other comments and Your replies, should say I understand You a little more! You are a great person. Keep it up.


    1. I hope I am not making it difficult to read this…apologies, the intention is not to cause hurt, more to cause emotion of longing and devotion.


      1. I certainly do appreciate it, you have great talent. It certainly takes time to accurately express something so important, something I know a lot about myself.


      2. You are too kind and generous with your praise πŸ™‚ I am glad that my humble words are finding some relevance with you and others πŸ™‚


  2. On the Reader, the photo captures one’s attention; on the site, the poem does! THAT is as is should be, I suppose.

    Having come to Your page, saw that I have already commented. But also want to say few words on Your photographs. Beautiful. And this one. Very Beautiful.

    Wanted to ask You, Just Where do You find these things? πŸ™‚


    1. swami jee many thanks πŸ™‚ it is good question, I roam a lot and whenever I come across something new or wonderful or even an ordinary thing in a beautiful or unusual setting I would like to take its beauty and quirkiness and share with all of you πŸ™‚


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