I sold my soul to the
devil,
asked in return dear life for you,
that you have all you wish,
you may miss me,
just come in my dreams
when you hear my screams
as my soulless body reflects
and kiss me,
that would be
more than enough for my trade
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
intimidating thought but nowadays these dreams Might be possible..Thank you for liking my post “Submission”have a great day.jalal
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Pleasure is all mine 🙂
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I do like the way you wander about town (presumably in your lunch-hour!) and all manner of things cause you to dash off another poem … 🙂
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🙂 there is so much on offer M R 🙂
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Wow. This one is powerful and deep. Amazing poetry. xx Amy
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Many many thanks Amy 🙂
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Absolute beauty! Genius of AB!
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Thank you so much 🙂 too kind of you to use such words for a humble soul 🙂
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Beautiful. I can feel exactly what you mean. Good morning from Germany 🙂
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Good morning from London, I am pleased that you are able to relate 🙂
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“that would be more than enough for my trade..”
Sheer brilliance.. nothing less!!!
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Thank you so much 🙂 good to have you back, I hope all is well with you 🙂
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All’s well.. Thank you 🙂
Just words don’t meet me often these days, so lesser posts!!
I just love the idea of this post, couldn’t resist trying to write your words in hindi, will send u if u permit.
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Absolutely, perhaps translation is the best way to get into your groove…why don’t you try big names as my writing is too humble, but please feel free to use any or all of mine to get you going, another way is to respond to something which inspires you, I wish you luck…don’t worry about flow or rhyme, just put your heart along with all veins on the table. It hurts and there is lot of blood, but that is when you start the journey of self discovery and not to give a toss what others think 🙂 Meri shub kamnaein aap Kay Saath hein 🙂
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Khud ko mita dein hum aur maang le zindagi teri…
Fana kar khud ko bhi jo kharred le ek khushi teri…
Meri khamosh chitakti cheekhein sun
Ke tu jo dhoondhe mujhe ek baar
Aa kar ke khwaabo mein is bejjan jism
ko bas tu choome fakat ek baar
Mujhe mil jayega me bahut zyada duaon se meri
Khud ko mita dein hum aur maang lein zindagi teri..
That’s just an effort to use the idea. Nothing more. As of your writing, it inspires me a lot. So, this is my first such effort, and the credit belongs to ur beautiful concept.
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This is beautiful my dear…really really beautiful, I suggest you should post this 🙂
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Thanks for such sweet words. They mean really a lot. I will indeed post it, with credits to your thought of course. 🙂
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No need for credits 🙂 I am happy that this made you happy, rest is unimportant 🙂
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Powerful poetic proclamation. Nicely done.
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Thank you so much for your positive comment 🙂 appreciate the generosity 🙂
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Powerful.
As I read the words, I found myself in the middle of a realization.
You captured the feelings I have toward my four children perfectly in this poem. I would sell my soul if i thought it would guarantee their happiness, and a mere smile from them would be payment enough.
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We all wish for the same for our loved ones, I am glad you found a connection with these humble words. Devotion and sacrifice are the ultimate human emotions and actions 🙂 thank you so much for such a lovely thought 🙂
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Well done, love it 😊
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Thank you so much 🙂
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We can say we have truly lived when we love someone strong enough to sell our soul for them. Beautifully written.
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Many thanks Sam, I agree with your comment wholeheartedly 🙂
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Incredible poetry.
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Thank you so much Raul 🙂
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Reblogged this on Benji Martin Photography.
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Strong poem, excellent write. Thought provoking as well.Thank you for sharing.
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Powerful lines …beautifully written !
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