Purpose is lost
Hidden traps all ready to devour
Leftovers of shredded passion
Compassion has no warmth
Treason of soul, heart’s mutiny
Tears litany, eyes stole
Fate left, empty goal
Barren surface, dry lips
Waiting, wanting Cyanide sip,
Drip, drip, tears leaving unlit eyes
Blind, deaf and dumb
Can’t say, don’t hear
Life’s hum,
Breathing collapses
in a countdown
Minus zero to one
Darkness won,
Life lapses
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
Your posts are what I call… OCEANIC.
Nine
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You are too kind to call them that vast, mine are just a small tear drop. May I know how to pronounce your name correctly, thank you AB
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Beautiful! Merci! FGM
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merci beaucoup de votre visite
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Hé toi! – tu parles français? Pourquoi tu n’as jamais me dire? N’importe …
The poem I like VERY much. But your totally unexpected vertically flopped image nearly made me fall off my chair. Salaud! 😉
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I am not that good M R, I just get by with my 6 levels of basic French at an Institute few years ago. The reason for the upside down image was to show mind wandering doing strange things 🙂
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I dunno, AB – I don’t honestly think the images are all that important. If one evokes the spirit of the poem, so much the better. But I believe strongly that if you can’t find one to do that, don’t use one – just a generic in the header.
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This one worked for me 🙂 I am happy 🙂
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That’s what’s most important, regardless of any interfering old farts … 😉
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🙂
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Love this poem. So powerful and such an awesome image. Great dichotomy.
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Thank you so much for such analysis 🙂
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I don’t know about that, AB. But, I do so enjoy reading your poems….
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You are too kind and humble 🙂
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Getting old…
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Who is… You are ok 🙂
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A birthday coming up always makes one ponder on the years gone by in life. But, thank you, AB!
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Dont worry too much, live and love your life, each moment is youngest you will ever be, so enjoy 🙂 forget about dates 🙂
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Very inspiring!
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🙂
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FULLY LOADED WITH EMOTIONS
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Many many thanks for a wonderful observation 🙂
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Love the poem and the pics too.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Thanks for sharing beautiful thought, feelings and pics.
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You are most welcome 🙂
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Reblogged this on dr. elizabeth oropeza and commented:
This good poem made my thoughts wander.
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Excellent comment and re blog, many thanks 🙂
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Thanks for your reply. Nice day.
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🙂
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I found my mind was actively busy seeking inversions to each line of this poem. It must be quite good to make me want to turn it around. Then to see the image inverted I felt more justified in my search for inversions of meaning in the lines. Poem well don. Thanks for sharing.
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I am really pleased that you enjoyed and actively got to the crux of my humble words 🙂 Thank you so much Ms Honey Bee Wood 🙂
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Adorei sua postagem !!! Lindo !!!
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