Urges may last
a rainy steamy night
Sensations perhaps
a day of passion
Your written words,
flowing gems of Eden,
will last till eternity
when hell will be ordained
as my destiny
for my undeniable sins
your pure heartβs call,
your undying desire
to come to this journey
of unending words
will grant me salvation
on day of resurrection
I will always be indebted to you

I see you’re in personal mode at this time, AB … I don’t know that I didn’t prefer the objective rather than the subjective. But that is JUST ME: it’s just one person amongst lots and lots who think the opposite! So why do I write it? – because I think it. π
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M R keeping writing, appreciate the feedback π
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Lovely photo — reminds me of French cinema!
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She is French π thank you π
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My favorite. π Thank you.
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Many thanks AD π
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How does one not answer your plea
Come with me
Definitely
Over heavens we’ll rise
Dance til mornings light
Exhausted
Find comfort in our understanding
A journey worthwhile
Tis not for my denial
I shall watch over you
Hear my faithful words
I see you
True
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AD I think I should post that on top, brilliant piece, much appreciate the effort and response, beautiful π thank you π
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This creativity born of your words, AB. You are welcome and worthy. π
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And you, as usual AD, are too kind π
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This is now my favorite poem of yours!
I love it!
And the beautiful woman writing down and order or totaling up a bill…???…fits the poem perfectly!
HUGS!!! π
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Carolyn, thank you so much for the wonderful comment π
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I like this side of you, AB. Showing more of your experiences in life, perhaps. It is what we draw on to write, after all. Good words, AB. Thank you…
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Many thanks Kim for appreciating these humble words π
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Always, AB. Such a good writer, you are.
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Beautiful, flattering. Enjoyed it! The photograph is a story in itself.
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Many many thanks π
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Reblogged this on Borboletanoespelho and commented:
LISONJEIRO!!!!
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Hmmm ..,, interesting
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π
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Brilliant human!
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Many thanks Kats, apologies for delay in response, travelled five countries in a week so it was a bit hectic!
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Oooooooh my FLEAS! You need a break human! π
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Life is short π it is perfectly fine, now feet firmly on the home turf for few weeks at least π
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MOL! πΈ Well at least now you can rest!
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I love this poem! β€
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and I am so happy to hear that Anna π
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great rhythm
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Thank you so much π
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Sounds like some thing a lot of baby boomers should study. The feelings of neglect are there in many levels when a single is over the hill.
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Many thanks for your comment!
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