Frosty freezing cold emotions
Sophistication grows inhuman motions
unwanted unnecessary blood spills
Nature creates humanity kills
Turning back shadows, moments, seasons
Allowing warmth, tears, smiling reasons
Bringing back love, affection, compassion
Hunting again for sapiens passion,
Hope barely alive, precious and rare
Desire to kill? then kill despair!

beautiful, so beautiful… Thank you, love, nia
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Thank you Nia, good to see you, glad you liked it 🙂
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“Desire to kill, then kill despair” – Beautiful, wise, soul-ful words ever!! AB you are the best!!!! xox
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NB thank you for the most wonderful comment, I am pleased these words had the desired effect 🙂
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👍👍👍
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Thank you 🙂
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Good Morning 🙂 Happy, I see.
Strong, so very strong, love this.
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Thank you so much 🙂 I am really glad you like this 🙂
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🙂
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Crikey, AB! This one’s gobsmacking! No idea re the association between these excellent lines and the image, but who cares?!
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Could find the image, couldn’t find the image for this M.R. 🙂 but didn’t want to delay the message so released it before my heart calmed down 🙂
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Does there always have to BE an image?
After all, you’re writing images with words …
If I were you, I’d post an image only if it was what gave me the inspiration. But then, I’m not you! 😀
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I have various type of audiences, some who don’t care about words at all (that is so true) so images are for them. I like those images, I process them to my satisfaction, they have their own story as well I am too lazy to do extra work 🙂
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Well, in that case you MUST take the time, once you’ve emptied your heart (temporarily) of its poetry, to find an image that really suits.
I have spoken.
[grin]
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I searched and searched for this one, some times you just don’t succeed 🙂 and I know how to accept it 🙂
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Oh very well. I suppose I accept your excuse.
:-\
[grin]
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful! That Dum dadum composition and this one are truly Indian music inspired. But your lines make it special – artistically & emotionally.
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Thanks for your comment and appreciation. The beginning is inspired by Abida Parveen Mun Kunt Mola a great Pakistani singer of sufi music, the tarana is from the days of Amir Khusro who talks about divinity and how it is within hearts of humanity!
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Great was the father of qawalli. Great inspirations!
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Thank you
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Yes! Immediately Man Kunto Maula came to my mind. I always felt that “Tana Deem…” is like a secret code. 🙂
Superb poetry!
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Reblogged this on 2l2phant.
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I love all the -ion words. 🙂
Hope is always alive…and just a spark of it can ignite into something powerful and strong.
Kill despair! Keep hope alive! 🙂
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Thanks Carolyn I am in complete agreement 🙂
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Particularly touching and sad. Congratulations on the poet.
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Thank you for your comment, much appreciated 🙂
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The poem has a force that leadeth thee to meditation. A true warning signal. My comment is the modest. Success.
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Oh this is just beautiful – I had chills throughout… downloading loads of energy just from this one post. I am grateful ❤ bundles of love, skies of light, musings of magic, and revelations of wonder for you today. XO, Luna
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Loved the ending 🙂
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Thank you Saadia 🙂
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: )
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Smiles are going on and on, but positivity deserves to be shared 🙂 😀
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Certainly 😊
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