I can cross galaxies,
Light years in a blink,
When your heart desires for me
Whisper my name, in your dream
Shooting falling star, here I be
I can cross galaxies,
Light years in a blink,
When your heart desires for me
Whisper my name, in your dream
Shooting falling star, here I be
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
I believe you’re borrowng (only slightly!) from Shelley, in terms of Ozymandias … But there’s the added charm of love waiting forever.
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M R
I know not what I borrow, what I loan
except for my few breathes of solitude
No word belong to me, nothing I own
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very very beautiful! that is what love is all about 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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It wasn’t meant as a criticism, you idiot! – and I didn’t mean you were plagiarising!!! I can see I must not say anything even faintly … off.
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I did not take it as criticism I was thrilled for you to even assume that I can even borrow from Shelley and could do some with what he wrote, my words just came as wanted to write that I am just a humble soul,most of the time I don’t know what I am talking about…,this time I most sincerely apologise for misunderstanding my response caused. Please destroy my poem, obliterate my concept, never stop 🙂 I like it 🙂 from you only 🙂
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You mean, you appreciate the odd bit of constructive criticism? OK then. I’ll provide it every now and then. 😀
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M R it can be more than odd bit, you are amazing enough to critically look at my work (while most people won’t bother), I will be thrilled if you do more…,and say to me, wake up AB this one doesn’t make sense or is utter rubbish, put me to my place 🙂
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Yer on, mate! 🙂
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That’s more like it 🙂 English is my third language, sometimes I am not sure my words convey what I intend, deeply appreciate your patience and guidance 🙂
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Ceasing me
Proves to be a challenge
A giver you are so freely
You must teach me
When to walk away
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Why walk,
let’s run and run
so fast that leave heaven behind
Going to unknown impossibilities
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Pull my hand
Peter Pan
Show me life
One the otherside
The one where we’re
Breathing the same air
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I wish I could touch them,
just caress them
Kiss them with my fingers.
life is just the same
Air more moist, soul pirates
Trying to steal hearts
Every time I look across
With that fake eyepatch
Made of rose petal,
Proving fatal
Is it you?
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Do you feel that
You’ve done it again
Pain in my throat
Thundar in my chest
Because of you
Not the sort to hurt
Anyone, not even you
Protect this lady
Rose petals always for you
Hearts on sleeves
Many try to move me
A poet knows
Where true hearts live
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Keep that beat drumming
Keep that thoughts in flames
I love these sonnets,
rhythms and nonets
As they come out of your heart
And bring dawn to my day
Adorning every passage, every way
I call life
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Your day beginning
Mine calls towards ending
Always too soon
When I’m with you
See my tears
As I sense you leaving
My soul begins screaming
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Words and photo…both romantic! 🙂
Sigh.
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Definitely captures love in its finest moment. Thank you for liking our post on our Kickstarter Launch!
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Best of luck with that, I admire the courage of pioneers and entrepreneurs 🙂
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It definitely has been a journey! Thank you!
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I know 🙂 you are most welcome 🙂
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The traveler of all space & time. Love’s faster than the speed of light.
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Indeed 🙂
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Like from another world…super photo
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Thank you, that what I was trying to convey, glad that reflects 🙂
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Bonjour mon ami AB un petit commentaire sur les commentaires entre Madame M et toi même .
Même si une partie d’une poésie que tu aurais ” copier ” que tu as ajouté quelques mots de ta composition , tu n’as pas signé par ton nom . Je demande a Madame M écrivain ou est le ” plagia ??
Je te souhaite un bon weekend- continue de nous voyager dans d’autres monde 🙂
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Bonjour Zingara 🙂 I need to respond this in English, actually I never read Shelley in my life as my poetic influences are great Urdu (national language of Pakistan) and Sindhi (mother tongue) poets of the east Faiz Ahmed Faiz and Shah Abdul Latif Bhitai, so no I did not copy his words it is just a a mere coincidence 🙂 so I am humbled if someone thought that my words compare 🙂 M R means well, I take lots of inspiration from her 🙂
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Juste 🙂
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Merci beaucoup 🙂
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WOW AB just a polite, curious question? Please forgive me for asking? Do you always talk in verse and rhymes? It’s Awesome! Quite a fan myself.
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I don’t 🙂 it is good to ask questions 🙂 Just an ordinary person with humble ideas, some of them just rhyme 🙂
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Dreams… The place where me and my lover meet
Together there we feel our hearts beat
As in unison fulfilling each other’s needs
Dreams are such a delightful treat
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Brilliant contribution 🙂 many thanks 🙂
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I was reading the comments AB what’s your first and second language…?? I am sure you are aware of Ghalib.. I love his work !
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Of course, great poet, you should read Faiz as well
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Never heard of him , I’ll look it up … !
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Faiz Ahmed Faiz, one true revolutionary poet 🙂
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Thank you ! I’ll find his writing
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🙂
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Lovely photos !
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stars kiss your lips tonight
flames roar within
without
complaint as
life agrees… life is full of vision.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
SHOOTING STAR…RISING STAR…THIS POET SEEING FAR!
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