Flawless victory

In an empty room
Walls spoke to me
Telling me their tales
Of moments passed
Calm tedious hours
nothing achieved
Exploding nano seconds
Joys of who won
When the deal was done
Sorrow of those eyes
Could not rise
To seemingly
Unsurmountable
Challenge!

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50 thoughts on “Flawless victory”

    1. I would not, could not, should not, thank thee, as that is not allowed 🙂 let’s just appreciate your gorgeous comment and say wow 🙂

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    2. By the way M R, I let you in a secret, it wasn’t much imagination as I do this everyday, day time job of a corporate type like me, actually wrote this in an empty meeting room 🙂

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      1. Oh, thank you for letting me know. I’ve seen tall buildings all over the USA. The most recent in Philadelphia, PA. I find them so amazing! The old tall buildings intrigue me…the great detail the architects put into their work. And the newer tall buildings are stunning!

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    1. Thank you, I am really pleased with your feedback considering I did not have my camera with me and had to rely on an old basic point and shoot digital camera 🙂

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      1. You are too kind 🙂 you should try, unless you try, you never know 🙂 it doesn’t need to rhyme, it doesn’t need rhythm just need word from your heart and flow 🙂 you will be fine 🙂

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      2. Hahaha, okay, AB, you give me the courage to try. In the darkness of my office, of course. It will be a long time before I’m willing to let anyone take a peek.

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      3. Best of luck 🙂 here is an inspiration for you, English is my third language and I only started to communicate in it at the age of 16, If I can do it, anyone can 🙂

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  1. Hi AB, just thought I’d scribble a few lines…when I read some of your older work and the more recent stuff, I can (as a mere unqualified but keen reader) notice the growth as a poet, so congrats from my side. And your photography, I find outstanding – not in a technical sense coz again, I’m not a judge of that – but more from an aesthetic standpoint; the choice of subject, your composition, etc

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    1. Kunal,
      Many thanks you are very kind. Most of this work is old, my latest work is being compiled in a book form, hopefully to be published by the end of this year in electronic form. And it is a one great big experiment 🙂 as usual!

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