In an empty room
Walls spoke to me
Telling me their tales
Of moments passed
Calm tedious hours
nothing achieved
Exploding nano seconds
Joys of who won
When the deal was done
Sorrow of those eyes
Could not rise
To seemingly
Unsurmountable
Challenge!

Love the way you’ve written about the image – marvellous conceptual thinking. Wow.
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I would not, could not, should not, thank thee, as that is not allowed 🙂 let’s just appreciate your gorgeous comment and say wow 🙂
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By the way M R, I let you in a secret, it wasn’t much imagination as I do this everyday, day time job of a corporate type like me, actually wrote this in an empty meeting room 🙂
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Hah! – explains a lot! 😀
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🙂
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corporate life?
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Indeed corporate life, more so corporate drivel pour moi 🙂
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Perfect poem for the photo!
Wow, those are some tall buildings!
Where are they located?
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Thank you, this is Downtown Calgary, Canada 🙂
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Oh, thank you for letting me know. I’ve seen tall buildings all over the USA. The most recent in Philadelphia, PA. I find them so amazing! The old tall buildings intrigue me…the great detail the architects put into their work. And the newer tall buildings are stunning!
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🙂
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Fantastic colours, and so clear lines and details. Perfect.
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Thank you, I am really pleased with your feedback considering I did not have my camera with me and had to rely on an old basic point and shoot digital camera 🙂
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but it works! 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Ohhhhh, I was so not made for the corporate life. Great photo and poem AB.
=)
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Thank you Staci 🙂 most of us are not 🙂
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lol. yeah, I guess you’re right.
=)
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🙂
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A lot is said in these few words of your, AB. Love the visual that goes with it. Perfect.
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Thank you so much 🙂 truly grateful 🙂
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I wish I could write poetry. You do it so well. 🙂
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You are too kind 🙂 you should try, unless you try, you never know 🙂 it doesn’t need to rhyme, it doesn’t need rhythm just need word from your heart and flow 🙂 you will be fine 🙂
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Hahaha, okay, AB, you give me the courage to try. In the darkness of my office, of course. It will be a long time before I’m willing to let anyone take a peek.
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Best of luck 🙂 here is an inspiration for you, English is my third language and I only started to communicate in it at the age of 16, If I can do it, anyone can 🙂
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Amazing….I would never have known. You are an inspiration, AB.
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wonderful form and i specially love the paradoxical starting and theme.
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Many thanks for a wonderful comment 🙂
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Multilevel metaphor in the 3D of wait; win; wither. Nice work.
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Thank you so much Mike, very well put 🙂
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I love your poetry- and such PAWsome images! *(purrs)*
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Thank you so much, very much appreciate your presence 😀
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And I love your work!💜
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😊 truly humbled!
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Awwww…🌷
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Fatality 🙂 Beautiful pic btw!
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Thank you so much 😊
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I like this so much ! Your writing and words are so connecting.
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Thank you Arfa, your most kind appreciation does connect to, and flourish, my humble efforts 😊
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You deserve this for sure 🙂
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Thank you so much Arfa 😊
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Hi AB, just thought I’d scribble a few lines…when I read some of your older work and the more recent stuff, I can (as a mere unqualified but keen reader) notice the growth as a poet, so congrats from my side. And your photography, I find outstanding – not in a technical sense coz again, I’m not a judge of that – but more from an aesthetic standpoint; the choice of subject, your composition, etc
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Kunal,
Many thanks you are very kind. Most of this work is old, my latest work is being compiled in a book form, hopefully to be published by the end of this year in electronic form. And it is a one great big experiment 🙂 as usual!
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Oh, wow, fantastic news! Good luck!…what I meant was the recent posts (and I try and see the dateline and assume it’s current/dated)…
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I repost 🙂 thank you so much 🙂
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Aaah…that explains it…hahahah! Subah hai na yahaan pe, toh dimaag thoda slow hai 🙂
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🙂
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my god !!!! you are always so wonderful
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And Guddu you are always so gracious 🙂
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