In a dream, I saw
Garden of Eden
rivers of milk, flowers of heaven
tree of life
Soul still
Just unsatisfied
missed your presence
you who I sought
for whom I fought
battles of will
essence
piety
society
woke up all bare
sweat running through my hair
a beat then revealed
open secret of billion years
Heart is your home
Most of us wandering
True explorers are some
Don’t want garden
Don’t need heaven
Just let your presence felt
in dark blackened heart
Cure the incurable

Oh My God AB, you take my breath away….
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Neeta good morning, I am glad you like my humble words again, appreciate your wonderful feedback
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I enjoy reading this. It provokes me.
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Thank you so much, I am glad that my humble words tickles your brain 🙂
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Schön.
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Danke Vera 🙂
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paradise is nothing without love 🙂
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Thanks SB for this wonderful thought, have a wonderful Sunday 🙂
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I saw you standing there
Address Eden
Come sit beside me
Blackened heart of yesterday’s evils
Much to learn from hearts that beat
Red in color pulsing deep
Rest in comfort
In all that is green
Let me tell you a story
My eyes see thee
Black is curable
Love is all you need
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Wow, now that what I call poetry at its zenith, this being is truly humbled and utterly most truly thankful for this honour. Bravo AD 🙂
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I couldn’t help myself, AB. I felt a need to calm that voice. Thank you for allowing me.
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You did tell
Beautifully
With soul
Body trembling
Coming from your heart
I wish if can show you
The day we met
First glance, from the start
My heart just change
It is strange
only hears your voice
Listens to you
Not to me
If am unsatisfied
Not free
No hunger, no pain
I am going insane
In your love
This an old one, still fits perfectly 🙂
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You are not allowed to call this scribble. The emotion you create is breath taking. I can identify with a voice taking over. This may be a new favorite for me, AB.
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Thank you so much AD, I am truly humbled for such amazing words, yes I will not call them scribble.
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🙂 Thank you
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bonjour * AB tu es un vrai poète j’aime beaucoup te lire même t’écouter même parfois faire partie de ton histoire si bien écrite .
Bon Dimanche mon ami !
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bonjour Zingara, j’ai l’honneur et humilité, je vous remercie beaucoup. Bon Dimanche et vous aussi 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on Finding Me and commented:
Wow
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Thank you so much
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Well, this is beautiful AB :).
Keep on inking my friend. Is this the pic you took? If you don’t mind, could you tell me where you took this?
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Thank you very much, yes all photos on this blog is my photography, this one is of a hotel garden in Nusa Dua beach in Bali, Indonesia 🙂
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So I assume you travel a lot 🙂 that’s amazing 😀
Have fun
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Thank you 🙂 I travel enough 🙂
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This is breathtaking. 😉
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Thank you so much, very kind of you 🙂
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It is a breath taking view and so the poem.;)
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Thank you 🙂 I am really pleased that you like this post 🙂
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I think that writing the short ones has improved your ability to write the long ones, AB. Lovely!
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Thank you M. R. 🙂 Grateful for your feedback 🙂
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Wow just beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂 I hope all is well 🙂
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🙂 All is good. Nice Sunday relaxing and reading. 🙂 Have a wonderful day. 🙂
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Brilliant, enjoy 🙂
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What a delicious lines it has this mixture of a bitter sweetness
I love it .
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Thank you Zara, grateful for your comment and appreciation 🙂
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It was a pleasure my dear
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🙂 you are too kind 🙂
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Your such a sweet person thank you
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I am just a humble person 🙂 you are most welcome 🙂
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Beautiful
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Many thanks 🙂
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Such beautiful, thought provoking words. Is it odd that I feel they fit moments in my life too? Keep it up 🙂
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I am so pleased to hear that you are able to relate to this. Thank you so much for sharing your experience 🙂
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I thought I recognized this poem. A nice walk down memory lane, AB.
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May thanks AD 🙂
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This is truly a shot of paradise!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Woow Absolutely beautiful, maşaAllah 😀
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Thank you so much Semra 😀
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OH my KATS! AMAZING!💜
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Thank you so much Kats 😊
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*(trills).*
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😊
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Love this poem! Deep from the heart.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Wonderful as usual ! 🙂 Tanks for sharing
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Beautiful as always AB. 🙂
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thank you Michelle, how is life? 🙂
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Beautiful. Profound words, thank you for sharing.
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