Delicate
So delicate
Life’s rhythm
Once disrupted
Goes out of sync
Let me think
How do I link
Broken beads
Torn threads
Undo deeds
Resow seeds
Re link chains
Calming pains
Pump up hearts
Refit parts
Make it work
Make it run
Make it fun
Play it hard
Rhythm restored
Life assured
AB 22 December, 2013
Photo: AB processed December 2013
AB you do it again, brilliant flow and pic too!!!
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Good morning Neeta, whatta neata comment (trying rap) π thank you π
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AB you rapper rocker you!!! π
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NB you too much praise for a friend you π
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…the foto makes this undutchable unamerican homesick for the danse on the other side of the pond…as to the poetry & the question…lao tzu observed on the other side of the other pond that things once done cannot be undone, therefore it is better to do by not-doing (wei wu wei)…gassho sacred warrior! ^^~~~~
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May you have a noble sacred war π thank you π
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i will die singing in the trenches of the war of compassion upon hatred! my hart convicts me that our poetry is burnished by yours…lovevreadingurshit!
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Utmost grateful for your reads π
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…just be mindful that the sharper sword is a wooden cross…dafree whitewolfe
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Sure
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i like your hdr photography. It is delicate, and not too harsh, like many I have seen… eve π
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Thank you so much, very kind of you π
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How did you make / take / retouch this image? I thought it was a painting at first. Cool.
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Simple photo at ISO100 maximum clarity, then maximum structural details, HDR, some other digital filters and voila π I can’t paint so this is my answer π glad you liked it π
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Love this and the pictures too…great work.
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thank you for your kindness and appreciation of my humble work π
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You are always my number one fan each day and your work is excellent…..humble is too less of a word to use for your art…..peace friend.
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Good work require appreciation π and I am sure I visit all my blog friends whenever I can, due to time constraints majority of time I am unable to leave comments but I always let you know that I have been there π keep it up, write on π
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And I thank you for that….that is wonderful of you to,do……there are a lot of good writers, I find trying to stay on top is very time consuming…..but I try:)
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Pleasure is all mine π
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So beautiful.
I am so pleased that I can offer you the Liebster award to your brilliant website! I hope you enjoy this historic prize to recognise your contributions
http://litadoolan.net/2014/02/13/liebster-award/
All my good regards!
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Thank you, I am honoured and humbled, thank you so much π
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Such a pleasure to visit your site and read your work. Enjoy!
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Thank you so much π
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A rhythmic piece…very nice! It is through the silence that I am enabled to stay in sinc… bringing order to my dance…
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Thank you for your beautiful thought, we all have our unique ways π
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Indeed we do. π
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I really liked the flow of this poem.
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Thank you, appreciate your read and comment π
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Deep thoughts behind such a simple poem. π
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Words are simple, thoughts too, depth of thought is within you π thank you
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OMG! this is again a poem I guess, nice very nice. π
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Thank you my friend it is very kind of you…those are just mere ordinary words in response to your lovely comment, glad you like them as well π
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I loved the flow of your poem! It makes me want to dance! π
HUGS!!! π
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Then, let go, what is there to stop you π tune is nice, get you in a trance,
till your feet hurt, don’t stop, dance π
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Aw, thank you for the comment in poem! π
I will dance
May be a little like a prance
As dancing brings a smile
And lets me strut my style!
HUGS!!! π
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Brilliant π thats more like it π lots of hugs back π
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Life’s rhythms in and out of sync. Excellent piece. It makes me think of how we’re creatures of habit and appreciate routine. I strive on routine. When I don’t have it I am totally out of sync. Back into it and rhythm is restored.
=)
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Good to know that you could relate to it π
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I love how the short lines in this poem make it read quickly–like the rhythm of a dance. Well done in both content–which, by the way, it beautiful–and form! π
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Thank you so much π made my day π
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Beautiful words and photo! Thank you for being such a loyal follower!
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It is my utmost pleasure π
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beautifully written!
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Thank you so much Cindy π
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This just flows, kinda made me tap my foot. And the photo is gorgeous!
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Thank you so much, tapping is absolutely allowed π
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Very good!
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My thanks π
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Yes it doesn’t take long to get out of sync.. but if you keep sowing the seeds AB… those broken chains will soon Link more hearts together
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You are very kind Sue, I will certainly try π
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Brilliant photo and mesmerising words….π
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and a very kind and gentle AJ π
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βΊLol
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i love it when that
happens .. usually after
reshaping the plants and
soil around my
house brings silence to my
mind … digging holes is a
meditation … putting plants in the
ground brings me
smiles … liberating them from their
pots … thanks … ks
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Good to know KS, thank you for sharing your brilliant thought!
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Thank you for a very interesting blog
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Thank you for your continuous support! π
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