Last journey commenced
pocket shows few silver coins,
pendant with a letter etched
heart is crushed, brutally wretched
tears incessant, blood dripping
walk on that memory lane
those moments, hours,
days, years, eons insane
all was left unsaid, just
glitter and jingling wood
should have saved soul
losing that would, could
Hindsight, a worthy adversary
knives heart from the front
before finding redemption
thousand demons to confront
The struggle is something I could resonate with
Beautiful imagery… One of your best!👍
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AJ I hope the struggle is not too much to bear , may you have a peaceful night and a beautiful tomorrow 😊
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All Gratitude for the prayer! 😊
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any time hermit 😊
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So you see eh?😃 hmm
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Ofcourse, very nicely written 😊
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I am grateful….truly utterly thank ful that you read and liked it!!!☺
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It is my utmost pleasure AJ, have a brilliant day tomorrow!
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Received your prayer today!☺ Had a fine day though not in Londoners’ sense (damp!😁) yet here it was fun. تشكر for the prayer fellow bard😀..
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As long as the weather was good in minds and hearts the rest we can tolerate AJ 😊
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Hmm! You have to feel good right? A lot to dampen but “we” are somehow like old wood! Tend to stay free of it…
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Hindsight, a worthy adversary
knives heart from the front
before finding redemption
thousand demons to confront.
Creative, good choice of words , I like your rhyming (not perfect) but sensitive and with reality. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much for your kind views and appreciation.
I rhyme so it can be considered poetry, otherwise my ordinary words are anything but 🙂
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I know, that´s why I commented on that point.. so It can be.. Yes it can. Take care.
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Many thanks again 😊
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Beautifully written, those feelings are almost tangible
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Thank you so much Sarah!
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