deep blue sea and me
destiny and its cruel jest
miserably failed the test
demand was patience
without knowing missed
nearby you exist
moments were not the same
time has now passed
I was, am, forever lost
bewildered, beseeched me
immense, unforgiving sea
Good poem !
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Pleased to hear that M-R 🙂 though not so pleased about your impending sabbatical, you will certainly be missed….
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beautiful.
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Many thanks 🙂
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This image looks down on boats plying a lake – or are they planes flying high overhead? That’s what I think of when I look up and see planes and their ‘wakes’ etched across a clear blue sky… as if I’m standing on the sea floor gazing up at the surface.
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This image is actually looking down on very big ships in the North Sea from a plane which was few miles up 🙂 I have obscured the ships slightly to introduce intrigue 🙂
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That would explain how intriguing an image it is! 🙂
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🙂
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nicely written. 🙂
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Many thanks Saadia! 😀
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🙂
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😀
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Hey, I just nominated you for the “Very Inspiring Blogger” – Award! – Stop by my blog to find out what to do next: http://mylittleavalon.wordpress.com/2015/01/05/oh-cool-an-award/
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Many thanks Caludia, very much humbled and appreciate the kind gesture!
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Moving!Beyond words…
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Many many thanks AJ! 😊
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Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.
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Time to take to the helm & steer your own ship instead of wrecked in regret…lol
Great piece as always flowic…
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oh regret is a very very human reaction, without it guilt, remorse, repentance and ultimately redemption may not exist, thank you for the kind visit and wise words 🙂
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