An arrow launched
in the air, fire in its belly
winged beetles chased
They met on horizon top
Kissed the sweet flare of death
Inferno sparks, crescendos heard
We just saw how fire works
It’s dark magic, tragic!
An arrow launched
in the air, fire in its belly
winged beetles chased
They met on horizon top
Kissed the sweet flare of death
Inferno sparks, crescendos heard
We just saw how fire works
It’s dark magic, tragic!
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
but a spark is needed to warm hearts
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I know, but this is a tragic story so dark skies 🙂 I will put a positive spin on more colourful fireworks one day 🙂 thank you for coming over 🙂
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Wow, this is so vividly written, there’s no need for the picture.
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You are absolutely positively very generous 🙂 thank you for your kindness, the poor poet in me is very happy to read this 🙂 I have to contain his ego now 🙂
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i love it 🙂
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Very kind, very kind indeed, of you 🙂
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It’s fascinating how fire (and fiery things) can be good and/or bad.
Those photos are mesmerizing!
HUGS!!! 🙂
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Thank you, yes fire is essential, required, necessity and dangerous 🙂
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Love this! Describes the image very well.
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Many thanks 🙂
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A wonderfully vivid picture. The imagery is amazing, as is the photo. Any chance if a happy ending 🙂
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There is always chance of a happy ending Rachael 🙂
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fire works its
dark magic tragic …
cold fire … dark … a
specter traps life takes its
burning souls cold
fire is its tragic
magic …
cold light .. absorbs
heat takes living light
steals living Warmth
away …
selfish magic beast it
lies
with such
spectacle taking never
giving …
*****
fire gives
LIGHT magic LIFE!!
never tragic
giving warmth, fueling life … gives
back, returns the
favor … sustains new born
creations, …
LIGHT magic LIFE FIRE guides the way … time marching
forward … we
SEE through eyes of light magic Life … that FIRE never
tragic … it
always guides the
way …
.. ks you always inspire AB …
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Brilliant contribution KS, many thanks for this wonderful contribution!
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… for you but, inspired by RACHEL .. ks
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Delightful picture.Mysterious words though…Couldnt entirely decode…
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AJ, when words don’t make sense! that is classic me 😀 nothing to decode here!
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But you see AB words are poetic only if they are cryptic otherwise they would have been prose.So there is a lot beneath the surface there.Do not undermine your work!☺
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I am not undermining my work AJ just a humble rhyme with no hidden meanings 🙂 in the comments you will see someone liked it so much that they posted a much longer elaborate poetic response 😀
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Yes I did read that but less is more and it must have had some impact that made them write that!Humble you are….
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😀
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Do you have an off day today??
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methinks/crypticism/isnotthe/meaningof/words/poetic/anymorethan … a period at the end of a group of words means it’s a sentence …. mary hemingway once said that all writing is poetry .. ks
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Perhaps 😀
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Love this piece of written work!
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Perfect!
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thank you 🙂
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