I see you and him
I see me and me
It could have
been different
if for that night
that fight
who was right
doesn’t matter now
I see you and him
I see me and me
It could have
been different
if for that night
that fight
who was right
doesn’t matter now
The picture is lovely but the poem is so sad. I feel sorry to hear of the broken heart behind the words.
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Yes it is a bit sad but not too much 🙂
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Sadness can lead to the best of poetry, I find.
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Indeed it does 🙂
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You have got such a great talent, I used to really wonder, how frequently you are coming up with beautiful poems…
Finding a fitting image with the poem is equally challenging.. and you are doing it effortlessly 🙂
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You are too kind sir 🙂
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I see. 🙂
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Sure 🙂
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…that is life, AB, I hope that your wound is healing… ❤ !!
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Never 🙂
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… Oh, how sad…
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🙂
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… it is good that you smile…
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Always 🙂
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😀
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🙂
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🙂
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The heavy sadness creeps along the piece. Short yet beautiful. I really liked it. 🙂
– Matthew
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Many thanks
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Very cool picture of the figurines. Sad poem.
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Thank you for the thought 🙂
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The picture, so beautiful. But the poem, sad 😦
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Thank you 🙂
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Wow true to life for sure!
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Thank you MM 😀
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Hmmmmmm, this makes me curious. Sad thoughts here, my friend.
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Indeed made up sad thoughts 😀
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Yeah, that’s what i always say lol, hide it all behind a smile and laugh, sarcasm, dry humor, my sadness is always about someone else, a fictional character or someone i knew, once. But the few closest people i know, they know, i know they know, they know i know.. You get the idea 😁To admit is to face, i don’t Wanna face that 😯
I always say the bad thought was locked inside a padded cell, eventually there were so many in there i was kind of hoping they’d just go mad and kill each other, job done, the past never happened. I made them up anyway 😇
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That is a wonderful short summary of life, Many thanks Louis 😀 the words are real, emotions and feelings as well, in my case there may not be a life story to support it! have a brilliant weekend 😊
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I can feel the words here. The image is very fitting.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Great words (y)
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Thank you!
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LOVE IT<3 Life is full of scars, with time your wounds will heal. Don't give up.
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I hope so Nadine, I never ever give up 🙂
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Striking! 😺 Very well done!
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Why sure!😺
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🙂
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Interesting picture to complement the heartening poem..
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Many thanks AJ, I hope all is well with you 🙂
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Seems so. Except writing all is..
I hope all is great on your side though 🙂
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All is well, summer is passing too quickly 🙂
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On the loose this summer too nomad/poet :)?
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Indeed, till the limbs tell me they can’t move, I am on the run 🙂
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It’s how Iqbal says:
“Zindagi yaksar muharrik ha, sukoon yaksar ha maut” (apologies couldn’t write in Urdu)
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زندگی یکسر محرک ہے
سکون یکسر ہے موت 🙂
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i felt the emotion,
an was inspired;
https://crjen1958.wordpress.com/2016/12/15/and-i/
chris
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Thank you Chris, may you remain always inspired by surroundings, things, and beings 🙂
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They bless me,
when
i
least expect it!
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Good to know Chris …keep going..
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How many books have you written?
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