Night is young
No song been sung
fate is ready
hands still steady
bottles to come
dozens and some
drinks to flow
cigars to blow
fires to glow
fast or slow
hours to spare
drinks disappear
hands now tremble
mind slightly ramble
not sure of place
earth or space
silk or lace
pure blank face
walking in race
back to the base
nothing is certain
hit random curtain
open and shut
talk and strut
red blue screens
white coats seen
where I am
where I have been
hospital in seems
bruised and cut
brain in rut
pain in the butt
no laughing matter
can’t do better
see you later
certainly
same pub
different night
ready for
another fight
I meant flight,
tongue’s slight
Nothing is right
must have taken
some substance light
Yesterday, today
Hmm…
I am not sure anymore
So good. Celebrating already ❤
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brilliant 😀
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and thank you my dear AB for liking this 😀
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That’s because life sounds more beautiful in your words. 🙂
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Now that has indeed made my day, forever grateful 😊
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Fun! 😉
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absolutely 😀
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thank you as well 😀 as tigger says ‘where is my mannerisms’
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AB’s humour? 😉
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😀
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cool
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Thank you 😀
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Your work is awesome. Thank you for your faithful following of my own poetry/commentator blog site. I am humbled by your attention to my own work when yours is clouds above mine.
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John, thank you so much for the visit and kind and generous comment on my work. It is my pleasure to visit your blog and what you offer, I learn a lot by reading and I don’t believe one person’s work is superior than other, we are all different and that is the charm being human. Have a great day 😀
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Enjoyed as usual the simplicity of the words and yet their lovely, playful effect
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Thank you so much, some poems are fun to write, this is certainly one of those for me 😊
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This is fabulous! And very funny!
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many thanks Maya, few smiles and I am done for the day 😀
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You definitley catch the vibe and energy of this scene. I appreciate and love the work you put out.
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Many thanks Todd, really appreciate your kind words of encouragement 😀
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I love this photograph! It’s like I’m actually standing outside looking in. 🙂
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Thank you so much, that’s how I took the photo and really happy that you are able to feel the ambience of the place 😊
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Truly a great shot! 🙂
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Thank you so much Anna, made my day 😀
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Hey AB! very rhythmic .. enjoyed reading it..was actually going in that flow as well..!! 🙂
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Simran, thank you so much 😀 if you are in the flow the don’t stop until you wake up in the morning unaware of your surroundings!!
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Excellent
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Thank you
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Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
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Thank you!
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