Wine and prayer mixes
Destiny declares,
fate fixes
heart colour changes,
undermine jinxes
thoughts repeated
in fours and sixes
Till redemption
Here is a more rebellious thought:
Tasbeeh
Allah Hu, Allah hu
Haq
Allah Hu, Allah hu
Qalander declares
Breaking his beads
Dancing on his feet
Control not seen
for miles
Rosaries, prayers
Nothing sedate
My lord my mate
Fill my heart
With love
Remove hate
These fools with beards
Long robes, black or white
crosses, rosaries in their hands
They repeat and pretend
You belong to them
Rest of us be ashamed
for our sins and our deeds
In young minds and hearts
hatred they seed
Hypocrisy they lead
Nothing they concede
Such closed hearts
Where to end
Where to start
Qalandar, the mad
Uncontrollable
dancing
Darwish I follow
Rest is just a game
Shallow and hollow
Allah hu, Allah hu
Haq
Allah hu, Allah hu
What does that mean? “Allah hu?
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Mean Allah…God…Hu..is…or in my each breath..Haq…truth 🙂 Qalandar is a Darwish who goes into trance to reach divine, by dancing on his feet 🙂
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I love this one AB as I do all, but this one has a special place.
Thank you.
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Many thanks Teela for your unconditional support to my humble work 🙂
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🙂
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Too bloody right !! I’m behind you all the way with this one, AB – as if you didn’t know awready … [grin]
Excellent work, my boy !!!!!
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🙂 I am exceedingly happy to hear that 🙂
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AB ,beautiful prayer.Its what comes out of the heart not out of the mouth.Regards.jalal
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Absolutely true Sir. Kindest regards
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lovely..
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Many many thanks 🙂
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BELLA GIORNATA! 🙂
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bella giornata bella signora 🙂
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WOW AB! This is extraordinary! Love it!
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Love you comment, thank you 🙂
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😛
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🙂
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Good job AB! Absolutely love this post! 🙂
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Thank you so much my Fab friend, have a great day 😇
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You’re welcome. Same to you 😉
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😊 I should have said ‘have a great evening’, btw love your city 😊
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Oh this is just excellent! I could easily visualize it. I also wrote about the tasbeeh/rosary/mala but I took a much more conservative approach, and I loved your rebellious thought..superb!
http://wp.me/p2qvHS-1W
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Thank you for sharing those wonderful thoughts SK 🙂
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Wow to let go and dance taking in all the essence of God I believe is what it’s all about! Nothing like that dance I think! 😀 Beautiful post!
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Indeed dance to make Devine happy must be something 🙂 thank you so much Michelle 🙂
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Woww..what a beauty..read my posts too.
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Wo what a beauty. ..read my blog too.
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Neha, Many thanks, certainly will try to 🙂
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