One short journey, two thoughts…
1. Silly one first
Train train go away
Come again another day
Heart just wants to stay
No hard toil, just pure play
2. Slightly pensive one –
When the journey commences
we look behind
find nothing but
dust of our thoughts
hardship we brought
by thinking too much
not acting enough
before the moment has passed
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
Wow! The photos are amazing and so is your poetry! Love it! š I write poems too btw ^^
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Thank you so much Dristi š
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Your most welcome! š
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Like both poems, AB.
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Very pleased M-R, I hope you are well š
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Well, yes. Old, too. Tired.
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Good to know you are well, rest I understand š
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Not yet you don’t. Don’t wish old age on yourself, mate !
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Reblogged this on rebloggobbler.
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You always make me smile, AB. Well done, both of them! Photos, too.
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Thank you so much AD, really appreciate your wonderful comment š
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So many look behind them AB, and often find themselves stuck between stations . As they repeat the same old journey over and over… Once we let go of the Past we will then move forward more swiftly to the next destination…
Life only gives us Lessons until we learn from them and let them go….
So Let us commute free from the baggage we carry… And trust that our journey is mapped out..
So full steam ahead… š and lets enjoy the MOMENT of the ride!
š
Blessings and Have a good weekend my friend
Sue
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Brilliant thoughts Sue, of course looking behind should only be for learning lessons and moving on and not sulking over what could have been š I agree with your approach š
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Loved both the thoughts, AB š
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Many many thanks š
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Very interesting sky!
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Very good observation š
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Reblogged this on mihran Kalaydjian and commented:
Commute
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So much action, the world going around. It’s enough just to get out, keep up, then come home. And where are we all going ?
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We are all going nowhere or perhaps backwards day by day š
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I think if you can find to relate with your whole, there can bea return, to nature, life, the way.
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Sure, many thanks for your contribution and thoughts š
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Amazing photos and poem…
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Many thanks š
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Thanks you so much š
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
WHOO-HOO…ASK AND YE SHALL RECEIVE!!!!!
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THANK YOU FOR YOUR GIFT(S) !
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Stunning pics with thought provoking second half.
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Many thanks š
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Me fascino…!!!
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grazie mille š
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The pictures are very beautiful.
The second part of the poem is true – there is nothing to look back to but dust, especially if I let my emotions boil at the memory. I always have to remember to look forward all the time while learning from my past.
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I write what heart feels
soul being peeled
in the process
dust and dirt
with fate we flirt
past daunts
present haunts
future all is left
here we go
thank you so much š
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I love trains! My nephew and I love to go train hunting. I know where all the train yards are so we go and he climbs on them and has a wonderful time! We love to walk on train tracks! They makes beautiful subjects I think! You track photos and train photo is beautiful!
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What a fascinating hobby, must be thoroughly enjoyable š trains indeed make interesting places to observe lives of fellow human beings, imagining their daily rituals, jubilations, crises, tears and smiles, hugs and surprises.
Thank you so much for visiting my most ordinary place and making it extraordinary š
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“No hard toil… just pure play!!” Love!!! š
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Many thanks š
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Nicee!
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Thank you š
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š I enjoyed the first one
The second one is spot on… š
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Just something for the road or in this case carriage and track to keep life amusing š
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Hmm. That’s the whole point..āŗ Something great came out of it.Keep writing fellow bard!
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I will try š
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And the picture is….magical.that’s what photographers do..capturing power of moments like these. š Bravo!
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You are now being extremely kind š
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And you extremely talented with camera and with pen both.
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I am humbled!
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Nicely written, i also love the images!
chris
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Thank you so much Chris!
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You’re kindedly welcome!
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Oh this is nice! āŗļø
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Another version could be:
Train, train, go away,
Come again another day;
I just want to stop commutes,
And, at home, to put down roots!
Your No 2 is thought-provoking indeed.
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