The beat restarts
Flicker on the screen
Hope of life rekindles
in darkness so deep
The person you see
That person doesn’t weep
After million cuts of sorrow
Injuries so steep
He has to hold his heart
Caress it to sleep
to hide unstoppable
salty water
Sugar next one =)
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Sure!
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“Flicker on the screen
Hope of life rekindles
in darkness so deep”
So apropos of the news today – Ukraine, missing Malaysian plane …
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Thank you so much for your thoughts on current events!
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Someone mentioned Sugar, I guess Flour then as well! 😀
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Absolutely, your wish is my command 🙂
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Whew! This poem is beautiful and difficult. Congratulations.
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Thank you, many thanks for your feedback, really appreciate this. Kindest regards AB
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Beautiful! Just beautiful!
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Thank you so much, truly grateful for your appreciation of my humble words.
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😉
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🙂
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Deep. THought provoking. I loved it!
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Thank you so much, really appreciate the comment.
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https://abozdar.wordpress.com/2014/03/14/thank-you-awesome-bloggers-here-is-an-award-for-you/
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AB, you never cease to amaze me.
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AD, I assume you liked what I wrote 🙂 thank you 🙂
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I adore it. I would think you could rest assured on that…shouldn’t I like it?
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Just in jest AD 🙂 thank you so much for your appreciation of my humble words 🙂
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You can be such a brat, AB. 😆 I am humbled out…thank you’d out and generous’d out… 🙂 Too proper are you! Oh, and HI! 🙂
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Good day AD, it is always good to speak to a brilliant poet in good English, otherwise my poetic licence may be revoked by creativity gods. 🙂
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I see, as you were, AB. 🙂
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🙂
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Something’s happening here, and I’m finding it a bit difficult to describe, AB … It’s as if you’ve been holding onto a great big file of these poems, arranged in order of excellence, and are feeding them to us one by one. In other words, you seem to me to be progressing with each one …
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Probably in my mind, wrote this last night M R 🙂 too kind of you to make me fly like this 🙂
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Rest assured there will be some you won’t like 🙂
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Hmmm … vedremo.
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🙂
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Wonderful.
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Many many thanks.
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very well composed…..could feel hidden pain
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You are very kind, thank you so much 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Iridescent Bubble.
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Thank you so much Michele 🙂
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You are welcome!
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🙂
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Dude – it’s hard to amaze a kat – but you did it! Again! Love this!*((purrs))*
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You are a very kind furry friend 🙂
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Awwww – thank you sweet human!😺
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🙂
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AB,
I am inviting you to write a poem on love in ten lines. If interested follow link below. Might be fun!
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Thank you so much, I am honoured, will certainly try soon 🙂
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🙂 at your leisure.
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You have a lovely way with words. Beautiful imagery!😺
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how beautifully you have described sorrow and salt——–the tears!
beautiful words
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Reblogged this on PenneyVanderbilt.
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Powerful.
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Many thanks Simon
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Tears are creating salt this weekend! So Sad!!
dwight
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Many thanks for the comment, much appreciated 🙂
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