Sun rises, day warms
warmth turns to scorching heat
Shades, cooler climes, for lucky few
Rest toil, digging soil, human stew
Body melts, soul shivers
Sweat flows like a river
fixing rust buckets at noon
Why the day doesn’t end soon
Unforgiving Helios prolongs stay
Some of us will die today
I really like this…. thoughtful
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Thank you so much, it is hard life for some of us…
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Beautiful use of color, the workers look like robots here 🙂
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Many thanks, really appreciate the feedback. The intention was to show the hardship and very difficult weather conditions so colours very much toned down. Sun and heat made the unedited image quite vivid.
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Lovely picture!
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Thank you 🙂
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Nice writing and nice colors 🙂 … I want to know how you did this! ! It looks so different 😉
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Magic 🙂 I experiment with photos for 10 minutes with various editing softwares and see what happens 🙂
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Okay magic editing 🙂
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Not really, but you should try various filters, colour pallets, effects, HDR, structural details, sharpness etc and you will find your image 🙂 each photo is different so unfortunately I don’t have a formula, I hope that is ok.
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That’s so cool how you make these pictures look so surreal. I especially like this one AB. And great poem too, showing the reality of the life of a construction worker. Especially one working in a hot climate.
=)
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Thank you Staci, yes the reality is very cruel. I am sure you are aware of current issues of construction workers in Brazil and in Qatar. Lots of deaths, unnecessary, in my humble views. All in the name of progress.
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In Qatar too. Hmmmmm. There has also been instances of kids falling from buildings because the protective net has failed to sustain them. Whether it was because of unprofessional installation or just not quality material, I’m not sure.
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Do a news search on Qatar construction deaths, it happens in the whole Middle East, third world countries labour work in 50 degrees heat…just too much…another construction boom another wasteful year of deaths….
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Wow, that’s awful. Thanks for letting me know.
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Reblogged this on Shining Star and commented:
Hardship
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I WANT TO BE ABLE TO DESCRIBE THIS KIND OF SHOT ! – and I cannot. I mean the technical aspects of it, not its subject.
Apropos of which … what are they doing?
You poets steal anyone’s bread from between their lips for your material!
😉
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They are currently putting up a scaffolding for later construction and welding. I apologise for all poets, the purpose is not to take someone’s bread but more to highlight the predicament of human conditions (and this is not the most appropriate shot for it) in construction industry in most of the world and unnecessary deaths of workers in hot weather…I am sorry M R if that did not come across.
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Really? – more deaths in hot weather? Horrible. Probably because the men don’t get enough sleep at night …
Here it’s mostly stupidity that kills workers – rarely their equipment. We have legislation up to the armpit, but they ignore things like the right protection and the right safety measures. And in a country having its hottest times in recorded memory, I haven’t heard of there being more deaths in the construction industry because of it.
All very mundane in regard to poetry. Sorry …
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http://www.theguardian.com/world/2013/sep/25/revealed-qatars-world-cup-slaves
Yes it is quite sad…re your comment re poetry…it is perfectly fine…btw the picture I have taken is from a very safety conscious facility and which is not involved general construction. So I am content to report no fatalities or major incidents in that place.
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Another fine poem. You are at the very top of your game Sir.
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Thank you sir, your encouragement is certainly helping, very kind and generous words, appreciate the time and attention.
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Without any doubt again a masterpiece!
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Thank you so much sir, appreciate your comment and kindness…
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Stunning as always 😀
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Thank you
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Nicely put “Hardship” both in words and picture.
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Thanks Norma, truly grateful 🙂
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I like the poem, as well as, the picture… Looks like post card…
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Haunting verses. Touches the heart.
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Thank you so much
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Beautiful, and little chilling at the end.
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Thank you for your feedback, appreciate the time and attention.
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I find your words very insightful and it actually brought me “there”…
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Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback.
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Beautiful perspective…
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Many thanks 🙂
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Look forward to your valuable views on my blog post ‘Writing is Wonderful”…
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I will endeavour to visit and comment on that Nihar 🙂
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Reblogged this on PenneyVanderbilt and commented:
This author is one of our favorites. I hope you enjoy too.
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Thank you so much Penney 🙂
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i had thought to let you be my muze?
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That is very kind of you, Bravo!
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Wonderful observations and I really like the use of pace in it too.
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Very beautiful and moving poem and picture. Thanks for sharing ! 🙂
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Thank you for your kind comment Nadia 🙂 very much appreciated 🙂
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You’re welcome ! 🙂
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To build a city sadly some pay in blood!
Nice work,
chris
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Many thanks Chris
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methinks
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Wow what a great pictures!
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