Pebbles of passion
thrown all the way to heaven
skipping, skidding, landing, drowning
blaming, claiming, slamming, poor rock
failed, bailed, curtailed, passion
life a still, dirty, swampy, marshy, long lake
absolutely anything, everything fake
for heart’s sake, have some courage
Onomatopoeia works. Beautiful piece.
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I am pleased to learn that 🙂 thank you so much 😀
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A pleasure.
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😄
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many thanks 😀
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Great photos and awesome poem.
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Many thanks Sean, have a great weekend!
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I think you have produced a bold and ambitious vision of an all-too-frequently ignored idea. The imagery- it works. Digging deep for the right perspective. My compliments.
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Many thanks PFG, appreciate your words here and at your blog. My compliments too.
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Great poem, absolutely love it
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