When the time is up
let me see your face
touch your lips
listen to your heart
last breath release
love will increase
soul will not cease
death in absolute peace
When the time is up
let me see your face
touch your lips
listen to your heart
last breath release
love will increase
soul will not cease
death in absolute peace
Perspectives on Life, the Universe and Everything 
I SUPPOSE I like it. But I don’t really … I never like poetry about dying. Kindly write something more upbeat, O Distant Wanderer ! 😀
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🙂 M-R, I understand, sure, soon 🙂
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When are you coming back (to wherever) ?
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In few days to the most most modern and funky Asian state, in Gangham style, I hope the situation would be different there 🙂
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Erhmmmm …[thinks] Japan ? But … Gangnam style ? isn’t that Korean ?
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Indeed the latter 🙂
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Deep but its never ‘time’ to lose someone you love.
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I agree, albeit sometimes we need to let go…
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That depends, did someone die, or was it an equal parting, innumerable are the reasons each one relating to a different circumstance.
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Absolutely, there can be uncountable situations where whatever I have written has no relevance 🙂
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The perfect ending to life. To see the face of the one you love one last time. To share one last moment of love and tenderness. I know if I was to die the most blissful moment for me would be one last kiss from my husband before I give up this mortal coil and wait for him to join me in the beyond.
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That is a beautiful thought to think about the inevitable, with acceptance comes much joy. Thank you so much 🙂
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I am speechless. There are/were people who have/had such a dream. For those who did not have such death, surely God will have something greater. And those who are waiting… it is tough to wait for such an end or beginning, whatever the death is..
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Many thanks for the such wonderful thought and contribution 🙂
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This is how everyone should transition. Beautiful. Thank You.
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Thank you so much, I wholeheartedly agree 🙂
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That’s how I want to go.
🙂
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My dear friend Staci, Tudo Bem, I hope all is well you and family. I am really happy that you like this idea of departure 😄 since we all have to go one day why not in a beautiful manner!
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🙂 Oh yes, all is well with us.
That’s how I figure. I don’t want to go kicking and screaming. I want to go beautifully and ready.
🙂
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Good to know, may you always be. Indeed, I agree with you, hopefully we all are when the day comes. 😀
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Death is absolute peace – that is all we can hope for. Agree with Stacilys, that’s how I want to go too. 🙂
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I am forever grateful for support of friends like you and Staci, indeed it will be wonderful to depart peacefully and with love in our eyes and soul.
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excellent. it is obvious after seing your shot, though man never looked at it before (is my english clear enough ? )
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I think I understand, thank you so much 😀
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What a dramatic death 😉 Almost perfect. Too perfect to be real but what’s the harm in dreaming of dying this way, no?
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Indeed, how are you 🙂 how is life?
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