Refraction

Thoughts reflected
Silhouettes refracted
Heartache, sizzling burning pain
Rambling roaming brain
Visiting memory lane
Hustled hassled nerves
Unmissable rising verve
as you passed my heart window
Without saying hello
Most loved forgotten fellow
Contradictions and me…

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28 thoughts on “Refraction”

  1. would you consider adding another line just prior to the last line. my brain really wanted to insert one in there…to rhyme with me. :)…i think deep down i want to be an editor . ..ha ha!

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    1. that is intentional, it is about lost love so last verse losing its rhythm and an abrupt ending emphasise the imperfect nature of our existence and relationships, I hope you don’t mind if I keep it like this πŸ™‚

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  2. Love what I’m seeing on here. Your use of labels is so intriguing and creates a must click feeling IE: Awesomeness etc! From a fellow currently rootless nomad of life! Cheers for finding my humble blog! happy sunday xxx

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    1. Thank you so much for your beautiful thoughts and encourragement! I am really pleased that you found my labeling intriguing, my dear fellow Nomad πŸ™‚ Cheers to mutual discovery!

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