Secrets of the universe II

Looking through the window
Flying fishes again
Leaped out of water
Silver fish first
Golden next
Then a pink
Is that what I saw
Let me think!
more and more
turning into rainbows
all the way to sun
Having lots of fun
leaping back into the water
Doing a ballet
One of them is a starter
spinning around
Pirouette in blue
shining in my heart
Heart becomes
a rainbow too
kisses on my cheeks
Hugs to the soul
I giggle, I laugh
Roll and roll
Happiness raw
Then they said
au revoir

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36 thoughts on “Secrets of the universe II”

    1. Thank you so much ๐Ÿ™‚ if you don’t know, this is a continuation of ‘secrets of the universe’ the first poem, which is about children and their amazing power of imagination ๐Ÿ™‚ do a search on my blog with that title and you will get there ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. I just read it! Do you feel like this? Do you see life (really) like this? Because I do and I really loved what you wrote. Beautiful…

        xo

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      2. Thank you so much, the central idea of these poems ‘flying fish and rainbow’ has come from a four year old, the word-smithing is mine including some imagination ๐Ÿ™‚

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      3. It is truly lovely. Thank you so much for sharing and for being open to the innocence within and without!
        Gold Star ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

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  1. OH! Kids would love this poem! I am a kid at heart so I love it, too!
    It would be fun to read to kids and them have them create art based on your poem! ๐Ÿ™‚
    Whimsical, imaginative, vivid!
    HUGS!!! ๐Ÿ™‚

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