Rhythm

Neon lights
Dancing feet
Clouds at the floor
Thumping beat
Angels’ halo on
the milky waist
Minds struggle
Hearts waste

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41 thoughts on “Rhythm”

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  1. This has a really extraordinary passage:
    Angels’ halo on
    the milky waist
    The dance is very romantic in the sense of the romantic movement in English poetry. I enjoyed reading this. It is really tightly written.

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