Have you seen her

I have seen her
She is around
Looking destitute
With gloomy eyes
Want to give her
All her life back
Then I see her
Bare arms with red, blue
Dark spots under the rags
I understand
why she lost everything
Why she begs!

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42 thoughts on “Have you seen her”

  1. Beautiful!
    Those eyes
    which are empty yet filled
    pierce me
    and I was hypnotized
    they tell
    they’ve nothing
    that’s why there’s no loss
    No words to say
    I just tried to change.

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚ slightly unsure how to respond to your wish, other than I think you probably can do much better than this πŸ™‚ my humble words are just that humble!

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  2. This reminds me of a song I started on and haven’t finished yet about the situation of poor women in north-east Brazil. The second verse goes like this:
    An old lay lies
    On the side of a dusty road
    Weakened by hunger
    Poor and forgotten
    Hoping someone will pass
    And leave her a little cash
    What do you think
    Is going on in
    The heart of her
    creator.
    Bless you AB
    =)

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    1. Soulful Staci, why not finish it and post…it is an important message, One second thoughts, the current version is perfect, your should post.

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      1. Sometimes we wait too long and our emotions are gone is something soulful like this, hope you don’t mind my encouragement, hit it when it is hot Staci πŸ™‚

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      2. I definitely appreciate the encouragement AB. Always appreciated. Actually, I started this song a long time ago. I just don’t know how to finish it. The first verse is about a 10 year old girl that was selling her body to provide food for her family. Anyhow, this conversation between us has encouraged me to seek out completing it. I’ll make sure you’re one of the first to know when I do.
        =)

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      3. Thanks Staci, stay blessed and stay encouraged…your soul is amazing, make it happen for her…end the last verse perhaps what humanity could without just asking for divine intervention!

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      4. Interesting idea. I really want my songs to make a difference so that would be a great way actually to bring it to a close. I just need to figure out how people could go about helping or what humanity could do.
        Thanks AB.

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      5. Humanity could work together
        In a circle of life
        Where money is not the foremost
        Important thing to crave,
        Passion has a place,
        Everyone’s life, breathes carry the same
        Value, putting the most richest to shame
        to eat well become a human right
        Rulers involve with all their might
        To help destitute, tortured souls
        Earth evolves as whole
        To become a better place

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