Hopeless

Suffering, pain
goes through
every pore
every vein
Mind wanders
into deep dark
alleys of love
Tears of blood
screams
all around, seems
there is no end
no redemption
Blindness prevails
Eyes just see you
No one else
Nothing matters
Nothing affects
This state of
Deep deep sorrow
Longing for your
company
your one glance
when I found you
my pain worsens
my love deepens
I just can’t think
Can’t blink
Can’t touch
Dumbfounded
Saying
nothing much
Still
I want it to last
I want to feel this
Excruciating
Longing
Heart crushing
Mind numbing
Sorrow
And pain
To remain
Your beloved!

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88 thoughts on “Hopeless”

    1. Thank you for your unconditional praise, I am beginning to think that since we are becoming good friends, you will like my work, whatever I write πŸ˜‰

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      1. After a while, once you start knowing other person as a friend, it is difficult to discern πŸ™‚ I.e.whether you were touched because of one single piece or the river of emotions and passion you have bathed in together πŸ™‚ praise is genuine from my side as well but do I know it is objective πŸ˜‰ who knows and who cares πŸ™‚

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  1. Hey AB. I know I already commented on this back in January, but this time through I could really connect the photo with the poem. And what a great pic too. So vivid.
    πŸ™‚

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